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    Tiresias
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    Post your work!

    Post  Tiresias on Sat Apr 21, 2012 10:18 am

    If you have something you'd like reviewed, critiqued or improved: post it in this forum! If you need advice on word order, colon placement or diction: post it here! If you'd like to know more about the publishing process: that's right, it goes here!
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    perkunas

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    Post  perkunas on Sat Apr 21, 2012 10:21 am

    I suppose I'll post something first to break the ice - I'm merely an amateur poet though and do not claim that much greatness.

    The Beach

    We drove up there, across the bridge;
    Flow and flow the sea did;
    Uncanny how it got so cold.

    The moon made itself ousted then,
    Fooled many every night
    When its screech came with no tune.
    We two stood in the hemlock called
    Youth, and then he looked out.
    I decided to look out too.

    The empty waves, red and clear;
    Less and less I saw them.
    I looked out and saw darkness.
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    Re: Post your work!

    Post  Tiresias on Sat Apr 21, 2012 10:24 am

    That's great, Perkunas! Start your own topic so we can discuss it properly.
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    Crabes

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    Post  Crabes on Sun Apr 22, 2012 5:22 am

    i did a mucky little book,
    get it free for yr kindle or ipad
    or just read it here...
    jottify dot com/works/come-book/
    it's only bits of my blog stuck together so don't expect a masterpiece, but if anyone does get it on a kindle or ipad please let me know if it works alright

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